Reflection of Shark Tank Presentation and Written Proposal

The writing process I had for my formal proposal was a little of what I had learned this year and a little of my previous knowledge. I had tried to use the process of asking questions while I was writing and researching my topic. I wanted to use this process because I had seen the success that other writers have had while using this method. It was harder than I thought it would be and it will take a lot of practice to get used to. The way I turned my formal proposal into a shark tank presentation was that I took the three main points I had and explained them. I went on to explain the involvement side, the social side, and the mental side of intramural sports and physical activity. I wanted to inform my peers on these three very beneficial aspects to intramural sports. I think my strengths in both my presentation and written portion of the project were in the way I explained the benefits. I thought I did a good job in the way I presented the information in both the presentation and the written part. I believe I answered the questions at the end of my presentation with great detail. I was able to tell my peers where I got my information and how that information affects us as students. The weaknesses I had were very noticeable. I got stuck up on a few words here and there, but I believe that comes with practice in front of a group of people. With the written portion I think I could’ve done a better job with the organization. I had a few overlapping themes with the involvement and social aspect of the written part and pitch. I think I could’ve prevented this by finding more information.